Tuesday, April 14, 2009

A Struggle to Continue

She lays at the bottom, motionless, unable to move ahead.

Broken.

Damaged.

Battered to pieces.

The hounding pressures of the waves smother her from every-which-way. Decades of rust and turmoil devour her every inch, slowly ingesting her from the inside out. Sea creatures of all kinds, shapes, and sizes come to feast, eating away at her remains.

Dark and cold, she yearns for the life she once had; for the sunshine that warmed her so, and the gentle breezes that gave her life and reminded her that she was still alive. Yet the only sign of life left in her is signaled by her ability to feel the pain from her battle scars.

Oil weeps from her core as she recalls the losses she has suffered. “Where did things go wrong? How did I get here?” She thinks to herself. But thinking only causes her more misery.

Each day is a struggle to fight and the nights are not any better.

Although beat down, she is not beaten. She endures the severity of her surroundings.

She is strong.

Made of steel.

Built in a suit of armor.

They cannot destroy her, only render her momentarily paralyzed.

So there she waits, at the deepest part, in the blackest ocean. At the bottom she resides, afraid and alone. But she knows she must persevere. One day, someone will find her, will track her down. They will raise her from her watery prison and she will once again be able to see the light.

2 comments:

  1. Hi Kaylyn,

    I think you did absolutely awesome on this post and brought about exactly what was required for a hermit crab essay. On the surface you are writing about a poor, battered sea creature but because you are such a great writer one can understand that this is the way that you feel. I also liked how you gave hope towards the end that it will not be defeated despite the devastating things that it is going through. Thank you for sharing this.

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  2. I think that this was a great blog once again. I cannot stop making everyone I know read your blog. The comments range from inspiring to when is your book coming out. I think that the profound sincere way you describe crying was great. “Oil weeps from her core as she recalls the losses she has suffered.” That was great description used do describe something effortlessly. Overall great blog, I think you should use this for your up coming essay. Thanks for sharing.

    Mercedes

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